pg 23 Thellis hills. Just a question. The ssethregorans have been here for 2,000 years or so right? Are they really still extracting readily available copper from surficial loamy hillsides? I'm just wondering about the tendency to mine out areas. We've mined out the surficial copper deposits in Wisconsin a lot faster than 2,000 years... I know the endless dark is an answer for continued mining operations, but it seems to obviate the need for mining surficial features.
pg 24 Chelydra entry. "One of the most unique features..." Unique is unique, something cannot be most unique
Pg 27 "The tunnels themselves are kept quite dry, for they are sealed through alchemical means or pumped free by massive screw pumps turned by tireless constructs." Thank you, and can't say that enough. Thank you for writing this.
pg 133 has the sea devils, but in the forged in magic reforged product (pg 48) sahuagin were mentioned as ssethregoran allies. Are these different, should they be identified as the same, or should one be corrected?
pg 145. iron parasites. Text language should be clearer about whether the bonus to NAR is scaled by tier. Right now the language indicates a flat +1 to NAR, but a scaled bulk with tier. That seems strange.
pg 161 Waves of exhaustion is listed as a control spell. I assume that is the spell from the base book and is now open to all people with the control tradition? I find that add of some base spells to other traditions just for Ssethregore only odd, like graveblight: skeleton. I haven't read the whole text yet. Did I miss an explanation for this? It seems odd since plenty of cultures seem to have just as much interested in animation as the Ssethregorans.
Maps! I know this is still a work in progress, and you mentioned needing to finish up the bestiary, but I sure hope there are maps planned as well!